Money, money, money we want to make
Maybe for our family sake
For money we leave all the fun
Work under the sun
At last we should return empty hand
Why do we fight for some land ?
Why do we do this?
For some money sis
A story will tell you the defect
Show you moneys effect
Midas ran for money
It is not funny
His teacher gave him a boon
You will know it soon
Whatever he touched turned into gold
He thought he was very bold
He was soon not able to eat and drink
His life boat was about to sink
His daughter came for a good night kiss
You all know what happened after this
Money is just dust of your hand
A demon in this fairyland
Success comes only by hardwork
Not by money or luck
THANK YOU DEAR READERS
Written By: SHRADHA AGARWAL
Nice poem
Arre waah…what a poem! Proud of you…
Awesome….good ryming
If you don’t mind,
I’m thinking that you should change something in these quote to maintain the same theme from starting to ending,
See you said that we will work hard for money under the sun it resembles the hard work and you commented it sarcastically at the starting and you are praising the same hard work at the end , so in my it think you must delete any one of those two sentences.
Rest of all are good,
Nice appreciable talent
Thank you
If you don’t mind,
I’m thinking that you should change something in these quote to maintain the same theme from starting to ending,
See you said that we will work hard for money under the sun it resembles the hard work and you commented it sarcastically at the starting and you are praising the same hard work at the end , so in my it think you must delete any one of those two sentences.
Rest of all are good,
Nice appreciable talent
Thank you
Respected sir
Thank you for your advice. I wanted to express here is that do hard work to gain success not for an unholy desire of money. As I am a beginner I think I have not made my point to the readers very well. I thank you so much for bringing out this point. It is definitely worth thinking
Thanking you
Shradha Agarwal